The critique had a few more bumps and confusion than I was hoping, but I think that I did receive some useful feedback. I connected my verb and my finished piece in my mind, but fellow students didn't seem to make the same connections. I need to work on piecing my thoughts together in a more logical and followable pattern, which will make it easier for people viewing my work (including me) to understand what I'm trying to convey and where I want the piece to go.
Some addition images from the project:
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